I'm doing good
and I'm a confident liar.
Winter approaches
like a killer from the basement
in this scene the tension is thick
only a bare light bulb
illuminates my sallow face,
and I look terrified.
I keep feeling a painful shock
in my left shoulder,
like I was electrocuted,
I am learning mortality
and I can't stop looking
in the reflection of the mirror
hanging on the wall
because I can sense something
is about to happen.
In the closing scene of the film,
I stand on the ninth floor
of an unidentified building,
and watch all the lost people
like a killer
through the curtain.
This is good Chris, but I feel that the line breaks are unnecessary. It might flow better in paragraph form.
ReplyDeleteAlso you should get a black ski mask and wear it everyday.
Also I sometimes I wish I could silence the editor in my head.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the advice
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