My thoughts blew apart
and lay all over:
In the pleasure of my lips pressed tight
or pain of my finger caught on
a hidden nail.
Might the faucet drip to ground me?
No, I don't hear it,
nothing comes.
My knees numb and
mind wilted, dropping leaves,
waiting for the sun to near.
I saw you skating by the pier,
put down my pen
and ran to meet you.
endings are important
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