Saturday, November 17, 2012

those shit parties

shit those parties that
are so crowded but you are
the only one there
you drink out of a red solo and wonder
why the fuck am I here
why does anyone come to these
and you weep a little
for all those
who ever lived
and got drunk 4 nothing
by at

4 comments:

  1. JMBG11/18/12, 11:20 AM

    there's a lyricism to this one that I like--'there' and 'here' feel crisp

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sprung_rhythm

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  2. feels11/18/12, 3:47 PM

    you are the only one there. why the fuck am i here. you are the only one there. why the fuck am i here.

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  3. feels11/18/12, 3:51 PM

    idea for title "those shit parties"

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  4. Sizoe11/18/12, 8:40 PM

    I'll take it

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