Saturday, November 5, 2011

Early Riser

adulthood has been standing in the kitchen
hungover, staring at the dirty dishes
what if nobody does them

you feel that? it's nippy this morning
maybe today will be the day
i finally get clean of you
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4 comments:

  1. JMBG11/5/11, 6:52 PM

    My literal dishes turned into symbolic ones too
    i realized i needed help and asked for it
    Feels good man

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  2. Sizoe11/5/11, 7:41 PM

    yes I like the feeling of this

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  3. feels11/5/11, 9:31 PM

    you should write songs

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  4. feels11/5/11, 9:31 PM

    or, this would translate well into a song

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